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Old Sep 06, 2005, 07:41 PM
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Desperate

Eluding peace
My mind wanders
Aimless toward darkness
Scattered pieces among
Ravaged deserts
Tangled emotions, lost in webs
I tirelessly weave
Angry illusions poison my thoughts
Deceased trappings of memories
I dare not remember
Desperately seeking peace
Falling aimless into the
Black pit of my mind
Dare not touch me, think of me
My poison intoxicates
Breathe no more
Cutting through flesh
Dripping red streaks
Across my canvas my paint
Expresses the entire being, my existence
Carving beautiful lines
My flesh gives way
Beneath the surface
Exposing itself freely.

Written April 28, 2005

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Old Sep 06, 2005, 10:57 PM
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written beautifully...I'm sorry that you are goig through this
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Old Sep 07, 2005, 07:42 PM
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thanks.... life ya know... what can you do? I am alone
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Old Sep 09, 2005, 11:18 PM
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Kieley you express yourself so well. I am so sorry that you are feeling so poorly right now. Please try and be kind to yourself. You deserve it.
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 01:19 PM
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very deep, excuse the pun, not intended
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Old Sep 17, 2005, 08:20 PM
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Deep and meaningful, respect on the part that you actually the courage to right it and post it here, so again respect.
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