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Dec 20, 2005, 06:31 PM
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I feel so very small and so very low and I apologize, I hope you all don't mind my leaving a poem for you all and myself. Just once I want something I've written to see the light of day instead of cluttering my sad and confused mind. And maybe some one can find some piece in it....
 Sometimes when my heart is racing and this fear is taking hold of me I know my soul is breaking through tear filled eyes I see A light is softly shinning and I pray that it's for me suddenly I hear a voice that's saying don't let it take you have faith your path is clear and I stand a new man no worries and no pain this will be your way... but the light and voice are fleeting and slowly they fade away I find myself alone again a prisoner to this pain always a prisoner to this pain... |
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Dec 20, 2005, 06:34 PM
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i'm sorry for your pain. it speaks to me. thank you for posting the poem. xoxox pat
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Dec 20, 2005, 06:36 PM
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{{{{{mystry}}}}} Thank you for sharing such a personal and emotional piece.
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Dec 20, 2005, 06:53 PM
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I'm sorry to hear you don't feel so hot right now, but the best thing you can do for yourself is express those pit up crappy feelings, and you've done that beautifully for everybody to see. I really like your poem because not only does it express your feelings, but it expresses the feelings of everybody else who's felt this way.
Your a very talented person, please be proud. I really hope you feel better, I recommend to keep writing, and continue finding ways of expressing this low productively, or in your cast artistically. Desirae
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Dec 20, 2005, 09:13 PM
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Dec 20, 2005, 09:58 PM
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thankyou all. See I told myself you were nice people, but he's a bit cinical. I think he should be clinical.lol
Mystry smiles. |
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Dec 21, 2005, 06:17 AM
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That is a very beautiful piece of poetry. I know it speaks so deeply to me. You have quite a gift.
Hang in there. We are all here for you.
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