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Old Feb 06, 2012, 09:08 AM
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I learned this exercise in a book about creative writing a long time ago. It recomended that writers put down their thoughts, on paper, uninhibited, for a short period of time. It said that after I did this, to look at the result, and find a topic or a story that I can write on based on info gathered from the uninhibited ramblings done previous. I'm not a professional writer, but this exercise helped me with coping with life with mental illness.

So I'll go for 2 minutes, GO!

go shorty get up its time for breakfast go to club gonna get done go for it wow I think is all there buty nowhere I like donkeys and butterflys and I wish I was a go daddy .comish I think it is all don. My don is a kinda goofy sort, ya know? I wanna go on a ferris whell with cotten candy and a big lollipop today and visit the beach with a big multicolored ball to bounce. I'm saying no to drugs today I'va good guitar I play when I wanna. I see clouds in the sky with the sun.. It is not cloudy today and no wind. 50 cent seems friendly, lest I steal from him. He seems reasonable today. Well the streets let me be. I think Im a good guy today I wish I was better today. I'm good s**t. Iva good thingy where you wanna be today in the hood, ya know? Good to go Bye.

I'll give that some thought.

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Old Feb 06, 2012, 09:19 AM
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Heres mine...

Wow im achy i really need to get a new mattress ah man its freezing let me just turn on the heating ooooh the floors are cold but i can't find my slippers anyway im more hungry than cold im gunna go heat up some pizza oooh this is tasty who would think mushrooms taste so good after being in a microwave for four minutes oh god now im thirsty but i only have pepsi wow this really isn't a healthy breakfast i should go for a walk but its all slushy and slippery outside mmm i wanna get dressed and go see jake but again its too cold out urgh now i wanna cut and don't know why lets see if i have some ice to help pass the urge oop no but i do see ice cream and you can't eat ice cream without watching scrubs man zach braff is an old looking fella i can't believe the dude who plays turk cheated on his wife why can't life be more like scrubs...

This is as far as got in 2 minutes im a slow typer. Couldn't be bothered using any form of punctuation whatsoever either...not sure what topic i could write about after reading back on my ramblings.....mmm.....
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Old Feb 06, 2012, 09:40 AM
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That was awesome. thanks.
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Old Feb 06, 2012, 10:18 AM
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Too bad. No inhibitions. What am I without? Someone I don't want to be. Sand. Would be lovely. Normally don't dream about beaches. But so cold. A beach and sun. Not too warm. Just warm enough. Feeling of sand under my feet. Feet get wet, sand sticks. Don't like. I draw in the sand. I throw rocks in the water. Then I go sleep in my hut. I'm so so tired. I wake up I go outside it is all black and I see stars I can't see from home. I see a shooting star and I don't wish for it because the moment is perfect.
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Old Feb 06, 2012, 10:29 AM
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sounds like a place i'd like to be someday
thanks
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Old Feb 06, 2012, 10:47 AM
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too inhibited to write uninhibited. writing about rolling my eyes as i think about them rolling. what's wrong with me today? this man is busting wall st as preet bharara collars the masters of the meltdown. why do i even read that magazine when i don't understand it or really even care what's going on. it's there just like i'm here and the tv's on but i'm not watching it cause i don't care about it either. just another day. the same day as yesterday. groundhog's day. my dog is sleeping on his bed, the other is lying across my back as i type uninhibited...the bell of an elevator sounds and a family gets off...distractions when i'm not even trying to pay attention. i'm stuck in my head and need to stop drinking this coffee. it's only going to make it faster today...slow down a little and get up off this couch and fold the laundry, fool. it's gross in there and the pile is starting to eat your house. soon it will devour the entire town. my thoughts stop as i try to think of what to say next...wait, i just looked out my window...nope, nothing, i'm done, lol.
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Old Feb 06, 2012, 08:45 PM
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Thats funny! thanks.
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