Need editing help

I am still trying to finish up writing a report against my ex-therapist. I am having a helluva time trying to word some things correctly. It's making me crazy -- much like the relationship with my ex-t did. Anyone out there willing to help me with a few edits? I'm talking about a couple of sentences here and there...not pages. Any takers??

You can PM them to me if you like.

I can also help if you'd like. I know what's it's like trying to get the wording just right. Sometimes it takes me hours to compose an email to my T.

General advice if wanted-- leave emotion out of it as much as you can and state straight facts whenever possible.

Wanted and welcomed! I was recently worried that the report was shaping up to be too factual while lacking emotion. The only emotion included is really in part of the summary of why I am submitting the report. It's brief. Hopefully that's ok. I appreciate your advice. If you -- or anyone else -- have anymore, please throw it at me. Thank you.